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Author's Response: From Kati's Mum: Sorry I didn't respond earlier. Thank you for reviewing! You guys are all so sweet. <3
Yay! I'm finally here. I read the story to both of my girls and they both have somethinmg to say...lol.
My youngest says "John, the Pony, is turning 4 like me, but I like the bunnies the best. I didn't like what they ate, but they can share my hamburger!"
The Birthday girl, who you wrote the story for says "I liked this story very much. My favourite part was the Pony Tram. Trams are like trains and my Daddy works with trains. I liked the bunnies too, but I didn't like their food either. They shouldn't eat a hamburger, cause bunnies don't eat hamburgers. They can share my chicken nuggets and chips!"
Thank you Kati, for this lovely story. My girls DO love it very much. They are still talking about the story and thinking of names to call 'John. Even though he has a name, they still want to think of their own boy names!
I loved this story too and I also loved the bunnies and that they were John's best friends. Thank you again!
Author's Response: From Kati's Mummy: Super! I am so glad the girls liked it. :-D Kati had fun writing it, so smiles all round. (And Kati also prefers hamburgers, chicken nuggets, and chips to "bunny food" ;-). Happy Birthday!
Author's Response: From Kati's Mummy: Thank you for giving such a kind response. Kati doesn't know what to say, but she is very happy about your praise. :-)
Author's Response: From Kati's Mummy: Thank you for your kind feedback. It means a lot to have such a friendly welcome for Kati's first story and will certainly encourage her to write more. Kati doesn't know what to say, but she is very happy that her story was so positively received.
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