Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 09/09/2008 04:58 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh, Lyn!!! You can't know how good this is, otherwise your head wouldn't fit through a doorway. It's so gripping, in the way that I feel like it's happening to me, not some character in a story. The switches between POVs are what makes the story, and I didn't expect how it turned out! An interesting twist, and just whn I thought all hope was lost - there, at the end! It's the best ending I've seen for a story in such a long time! So hopeful... that's great. I sound like a babbling idiot, don't I? Sorry! But it's wonderful, Lynnie-Lyn, wonderful!

Blaire

Name: Jen (Signed) · Date: 12/06/2008 07:44 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

This is just heartbreaking... especially since we know what happens to them. So sad that they took so long to allow their feelings for each other and that it ended so quickly.
Beautifully written. I love that it shows both sides and the pain and love that they both have. Well done.

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 12/06/2008 07:02 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww... I loved this! I really love how you did it with the switching point of views and then eventually switching so quickly that you can't even really tell which one is which. It's like their thoughts have collided together, and I love that. This is a great romance piece, and the story of the two is so tragic. I love the connection to them, and I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for this piece. :)

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 12/06/2008 04:36 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow! Lyn...this is amazing! The switching between the two point of views is seamless, and I love how it starts off slow, and then speeds up, each thought blends into the other's as if they're thinking the same things. I love it!

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