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Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 26/09/2008 02:36 am · Chapter: Chapter 4

Good job, and yeah, Murphy's law applies here, also.

Verity means well, but George will be a hard nut to crakc. . . possibly never.

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 09/09/2008 10:58 pm · Chapter: Chapter 4

I liked the ending very much. There was lot to the sentence, "If George was there, they could have made it to the top". George just isnt't there, is he? He's lost somewhere. Poor thing.

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 09/09/2008 10:54 pm · Chapter: "He's a twin, you know."

Oh! And I so thought he had found one person that he could find something beyond pity from. I think that this is very well done. I liked the description of the awkward situation and the emotions George went through. Good job.

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 09/09/2008 10:50 pm · Chapter: Anonymity

I like how you contrast this loud boisterous crowd with the one he left at the Three Broomsticks. One tried to drag him into it, and the other offered him anonymity. Now I have to find out who has discovered him there!

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 09/09/2008 08:29 pm · Chapter: Paint, Pictures, Pumpkin-Parfait

I love how you've written George here. As I've told you, I am a twins kind of gal. I think the way you've gotten his family involved in trying to bring him back to his old self, getting him out and checking up on him, is very real. Most people don't get that kind of grief, and try to help people get over it, instead of walking through it with them. Verity is interesting. Can't wait to read more!

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 08/09/2008 03:31 am · Chapter: "He's a twin, you know."

Alright Verity! Bless her heart., ANd I hope George has a MAJOR bout of the guilts for thinking he wouldn't be upset if she wasn't there.

Why are the Weasley men such boneheads?

Ah, well, at least the picture IS back.

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 08/09/2008 03:25 am · Chapter: Anonymity

Short chapter that packed in a lot of George's feelings and set up for the next chapter.

And three guesses who just called his name!

No. . . that's not right

Nope . . wrong again . .

What do you mean you don't know? Don't be daft!

Just read the next chapter and find out!

HE!HE!HE!

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 08/09/2008 03:18 am · Chapter: Paint, Pictures, Pumpkin-Parfait

THINK GEORGE!

ACCIO PICTURE!

She probalby just put i in the dsut bin that morning, so it could still be outside! Hopefully . . . . maybe . . . if you get lucky. . . . maybe not. Bummer.

Obviously this Verity is dumber that a post not to have realized it was Fred. BIMBO!

Well, I'm just going to continue on and see what happens.

HE!HE!HE!

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 25/08/2008 02:06 am · Chapter: Chapter 4

I love the comparisons between Fred & George and Verity and her sister. I love how Claire lives in a glass house and can handle the fragility of life, and Verity was in a very fragile state at that moment and needed someone who could help her to not break. The metaphor is truly brilliant!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you liked the metaphor, since I was afraid it was too 'in-your-face.' I'm glad you liked it, Taryn! Thank you so much for reviewing!

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 22/06/2008 01:49 am · Chapter: "He's a twin, you know."

Aww.. I think that it's perfect for George to run into Angelina. Though she's not Fred's twin, she still is bound to experience a lot of the grief. I like how you portrayed George in this chapter.. I guess this whole story so far, about how he's kind of just going through the motions, and not ready to move on. I think it makes sense and it will take time. I hope there's more Angelina encounters. She seems to be good for him. Great chapter!

Author's Response: I think you really hit it head on when you said that he's just going through the motions. I feel for George, and he kind of feels like he's alone, which Angelina might be able to do something about... ; ) Thank you so much for all of your reviews, Jamie! I really appreciate them. : )

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 22/06/2008 01:45 am · Chapter: Anonymity

Eep.. who is it? Please excuse the shortness of this review because I want to find out. I enjoyed this chapter as always, and I really like how just seeing a twin makes George sad. Anything could remind him of Fred. This is great!

Author's Response: Since you've already reviewed the next chapter, I know you know. ; ) I'm so happy you like it so far, Jamie! I've really enjoyed writing it. Thank you for reviewing!

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 16/06/2008 01:31 am · Chapter: "He's a twin, you know."

Well, at least she was able to retrieve the picture. And I like how you had the reunion with Angelina be awkward and not fully settled. The fact that the twins are her nephews was an interesting twist as well. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: I wanted to show that it truly was an honest mistake by having Verity go find the picture for George. As for Angelina, not everyhting is easy and happy between them, and I think it's much more realistic that their first meeting in a year or so is awkward at times. I'm glad you liked the chapter, Taryn! I'll try to update as soon as I can. : ) Thank you so much for the review!

Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 13/06/2008 04:43 am · Chapter: Paint, Pictures, Pumpkin-Parfait

Wow, I love this so far! I really love your writing, and this is another great one so far. It's interesting to figure out what happened to George after Fred died and it's said that Verity didn't know it was Fred. I hope she doesn't stay around for too long. George's whole attitude towards her seems like they don't even get along too well. Anyways, great start here, and I'm looking forward to more!

Author's Response: Hmm... she might stuck around for just a little while longer. ;) And I really feel for George, and I wanted to try writing about him and how he's dealing with Fred's death. I'm glad you liked the chapter, Jamie! I'm just about to submit the second chapter! Thanks for reviewing!

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 13/06/2008 04:14 am · Chapter: Paint, Pictures, Pumpkin-Parfait

George felt the clatter and bangs and laughter and hollers of the Three Broomsticks squeeze their way into his ear, rattle noisily around inside his head, and then exit without making any impression on him other than a headache.

That's brilliant imagery, Rose. I still can't get over how someone who knew both George and Fred could possibly NOT know that that was a picture of Fred and not George...even if you can't tell the two apart, just knowing THAT would make you think it was the twin.

The fact that he was so relieved that she wasn't there when he arrived is very telling. I look forward to more of this!

Author's Response: I like literary devices. ;) And yes, Verity's mistake was big and rather stupid. She should know. Their relationship isn't so stable at the moment, but I can't say any more! Thanks for reviewing, Taryn!

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