the only thing I would have liked to see is Remus react to them being animagus a little differently...I think he would have been much angrier for endangering themselves like that. Even if the bite couldn't affect them. He would think they were foolish for wanting to do that and he might even feel a little guilty, especially since he bit Sirius.
Other than that it was a lovely one shot!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you loved it! I put a lot of thought into the transforming. I'm sorry that you think that the reaction should have been different. I tried to capture as best I could what I thought that Remus would be feeling in that situation. I am still glad that you thought that other than that it was a lovely one-shot however.
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