Name: ginwannabe (Signed) ·
Date: 25/08/2008 05:11 am ·
Chapter: Chapter 1
This is so sad. I'm so sorry for your loss. I find that writing helps me to ease the pain and move on. I liked how you described the day as sunny, and the drought, and his wishing for rain, only to have the rain come too late for them. Quite moving.
Name: Eyriana (Signed) ·
Date: 24/08/2008 07:24 pm ·
Chapter: Chapter 1
That was absolutely chilling/heart-rendering. All at once. It's such a short piece, but more impacting than many longer stories. Maja, you're incredible! I loved the way you wrote every sentence - especially "And we were so drunk on each other that we didn't see."
It's incredible, Maja. Great job :D
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