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Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 17/08/2008 07:15 pm · Chapter: The Game

AH, the chess game of love has started.

I HATE CHESS.

At least you had them snogging in less than 1,000 words! instead of somewhere deep in chapter 12!

HE!HE!HE!

Cute one-shot! 

 

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Name: Hekate101 (Anonymous) · Date: 08/08/2008 10:21 pm · Chapter: The Game
*points and laughs* Oh poor confused Draco. Paranoia is such fun. And D/Hr, of course. That too. There are a few comma splices that throw off the flow, but it's nice. The quote you chose for the beginning fits well, and you show Draco's frustration excellently. Good work, overall.


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