Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: Eyriana (Signed) · Date: 09/09/2008 07:43 pm · Chapter: The Thing with Feathers

This is brilliant! I know, I'm American, but that's the best thing I can think to say. It's genius. I like that Harry dances around the actual words and never comes out and says that Hermione loves Ron, because then this would have been clichéd and not nearly as fun to read as this! But you wouldn't have done that, of course - you are such an original writer. I really love it, great job!

Blaire

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 08/09/2008 03:09 am · Chapter: The Thing with Feathers

Ron Bilius Weasley is, without a doubt, the most socially inept, romantically delinquent ( despite the snogging sessions with Lavander ), commitment deficient, clueless, boneheaded, stubbornly shortsighted, hopelessly, idioticaly stupid boy who ever walked the halls of Hogwarts.

Even with Crabbe and Goyle for comparison; they are lightyears ahead of him. At least Vincent and Gregory and their dates had fun at the Yule Ball.

GET WITH THE PROGRAM!

Well, we know they do, EVENTUALLY!

It's a wonder Hermione didn't wind up with Victor Krum OR Draco!

HE!HE!HE!

Name: Georgia Weasley (Signed) · Date: 28/08/2008 05:43 am · Chapter: The Thing with Feathers

This was absolutely brilliant. Ron is not as thickheaded as he would like Harry to think he is. How stubborn can one guy be, when everyone knows why he's brought Hermione's aviary wrath upon himself? Even Lavender is smart enough to be jealous of Hermione, and she's an idiot. You played Harry's delimma of being torn between exasperation and desperation for Ron to come to truth of it beautifully. Great emotion. I loved this!

Author's Response: Oh, Ron. My dear, dear Ron. *shakes head* I had so much fun with him in this one-shot (and Harry, too), and I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for all of your lovely reviews, Shanon! I really appreciate them! : )

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 25/08/2008 01:58 am · Chapter: The Thing with Feathers

I love how you tied the poem into this story. You did a great job with it, too. My favorite thing about this story is how you describe Ron and the threads on the chair. "... where his fingers were pulling at the stray bits of thread that had come loose, like each one had attacked him personally like the canaries." And then you continue on with it for the rest of the story, like unraveling the threads of the chair will help him to unravel the confusion in his head. You have Ron so thoroughly in canon in this story, it's scary. Great job!

Author's Response: I love Ron and I would hate to do him an injustice, so I'm glad you thought I wrote him well. : ) That poem is one of favorites; you can't beat a classic Dickinson poem with perfect rhyme and meter. Thank you so much for reviewing!

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