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Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 24/12/2008 03:34 am · Chapter: Hand of Doom

Another excellent chapter.

The whole ordeal with the Prince estate was masterful. 10/10



Author's Response: Thank you.  I'm glad the Prince episode worked.  I appreciate your kind reviews.


Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/2008 04:12 am · Chapter: Solitude

Sadly, things like this happen to kids sometimes...

Well captured. I hope not from experience.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Yes, I think Snape may have won the prize for the Major Character with the Most Depressing Childhood.



Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/2008 03:45 am · Chapter: Sorcerers of Madness
This look into Severus' past is extremely well done, and worthy of being canon. 10/10

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  Yours are my first reviews, ever, at Gluttony. I appreciate them greatly.



Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 23/12/2008 03:22 am · Chapter: Paranoid

This is off to a great start.

I often wondered how "the incident" that Harry saw in the Occlumency lesson would be from Snape's perspective.

Well done.



Author's Response: Thank you very much.  As it worked out, I began with this -- and then felt I had to go back to the beginning and deal with the backstory.  So my chronology worked out oddly.  I appreciate your comments.


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