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PERFECT!
Just bloody perfect way to get rid of Rita! WINK! WINK!
HE!HE!HE!
Author's Response: I knew you'd like that! I forgot to go back and give you credit for the thought in my author's note. I will do that soon!
I saw no grammatical errors nor any spelling errors. I'm horrible with dialogue punctuation (as you might have noticed in my story)so I can't expand on that. However, normal story punctuation looked fine.
I thought you were very descriptive in relaying Ginny's feelings. I felt her anguish so much I cried. I know I already said that but I did! Thanks for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: After the total of 2 reviews I've gotten, I actually may go back and add a bit more between Ginny and Rita, since that is the biggest complaint I've gotten. Thanks so much for the lovely review! I appreciate it so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it.
BRILLIANT . . . . BLOODY BRILLIANT!!!!!!
I'm speakless/wordless. ( Which, having read my other reivews, you know to be unusual, to say the least. Sorry about the pun!)
ANYHOW, your vision of the inner turmoil Ginny was going though was spot on and I couldn't help but feel for her and hope she could get to Harry. Then to put his needs before her's, well that was going above and beyond. At least she knew he was safe and alive and would get some rest, especially if SHE had anything to do with it . . . and she did! That was SO good and I loved Ginny getting rid of Rita the way she did ( should have sent her off with the back of her skirt on fire. )
Hopefully there's more to come as I HATED the fact that JKR just skipped 19 years and thought that we'd be satisfied the everyone's life turned out alright. Just because she knew what everyone had done, didin't give us a clue. Now this is the way to 'fill in the gaps'
BRAVO!!!!!
Now, about Draco . . . and Neville . . . and what happened with Severus . . . . HUMMMMM?????
HINT! HINT! WRITE MORE, ASAP! Please, pretty please.
HE!HE!HE!
Author's Response: THANKS!!!! I love encouraging reviews like this. Honestly, I agree with Mark Twain when he said, "I can live for two weeks on a good compliment." I am planning a bit to tell how Asteria and Draco (from Family Way) got together, and maybe a one shot about James Sirius and sibling rivalry when Al comes along. I am also working on a one shot songfic about Sev and Lily. Thanks so much for reviewing!! I really wanted to show how Ginny knows that Harry, though a hero and everything, needs saving just as much as the rest of the world. He sacrificed for them all, so it was a no brainer for her to sacrifice her desire to be comforted for his peace of mind. That kind of sets the tone for their entire relationship, I think. She never sees him as the 'golden boy', but just Harry. The one she loves. Thanks again for the lovely review!
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