Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 10:40 pm · Chapter: Finale

I have never read a Dramione that I could actually finish,much less one that I truly adored and reviewed each chapter. This is so well done that I wish I could come up with something half as good. Excellent tale! But as with all good things...

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 10:31 pm · Chapter: Action

Holy cow, what a game!
I couldn't have come up with this if I tried! You write a game much better than I do!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 10:22 pm · Chapter: Preparations

Oh, Draco in red! I can see it. No, hang on, I can't! hehe
You've got his feelings dead-smack on it, too. I can only imagine how I'd feel...yeeeeesh.

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 10:17 pm · Chapter: Compromises

Short and to the point. I liked it. The whole episode in Charms was just smashing!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 10:04 pm · Chapter: Concessions

I just don't know how to praise this chapter. There's so much good stuff in it, especially the bit about lounging on the Broomstick while flying! Just excellent, and I wish I could come up with stuff like this.

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 10:00 pm · Chapter: Penance

Oh, you just get better and better with each twist and turn! Can't wait to see how this turns out. Such a thick plot and so many things to tie up!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 09:54 pm · Chapter: Troubleshooting

That was another save I didn't see coming. Writing twists like this is something I need more practice at, obviously! Masterful.

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 09:44 pm · Chapter: Knockout

It didn't get better...oy!
Can we please kill the Patels now? Sadly enough, it's a good capture of gossiping high school age girls. I had my share of them, too, as I'm sure everyone has. Good touch, though.

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 09:39 pm · Chapter: Round Three

Well that one came out of left field! That was a twist I never would have thought of. I couldn't have written this, because a war would have started. Excellent!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 09:33 pm · Chapter: Round Two

Oh dear, the plot just got thicker. And you had things going SO well, too. Why do I think all hell's about to break loose? Tasteful meeting, too, and they've accomplished so much so far.

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 09:27 pm · Chapter: Round One

That went better than I thought it would. Nothing like a trip to WWW to break some ice, even if Ron was his usual self - and who could blame him, really?

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 09:10 pm · Chapter: Replacements

Ouch. Kicked off the team. Hate to say it, but the former-Slytherins need something to adjust their outlook. Did I just say that?! Masterful!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 09:02 pm · Chapter: Blackmail, Anyone?

The 'battle' between the twins and Draco was just superb! What a way of bringing a detail back to bite someone with. And still the lingering dilemma. Wow... can't wait to see what happens next!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 08:15 pm · Chapter: Guilt...Maybe

Oh, lovely! Here comes the meeting with Harry and Ron! Methinks this isn't going to go well. Comparing Draco and his thoughts to Lucius' mindset was just brilliant! I loved it. Of course, the old man would have a stroke and die, probably! ;-)

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 08:10 pm · Chapter: Double Trouble

Another complication. Of course, it had to be coming from the girls. I never liked the Patel girls. Sorry! I'd love to see Draco turn them into newts. You're covering every single base, though, and that's great!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 08:02 pm · Chapter: Apologies

Nice! For a moment there, I thought we were going to see a porn scene! Of course, it was again very well done without being over the top. Now we seem to be back where we started - until some other complication screws it up again?

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 07:58 pm · Chapter: Reflections

Classic Draco! Rudest prat at school? Of course he is - "She's not Hermione." Again, this must be a girl-thing, because I don't think I could write something like this. There's feeling in it, and Draco isn't a cardboard cutout. He's a "real" teenager having real issues in this.

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 12/02/2010 07:52 pm · Chapter: Disagreements

Very nice vulnerability in Draco. Of course, it would be the logical conclusion with all he's been through, and the changes since the War can't be coming easy to him. Well-handled and not overdone. ;-)

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/2010 11:25 pm · Chapter: Unexpected Assistance

Ohhh, another series of unfortunate events. Sorry...
But a conflict very well done. I have to say, I honestly saw the BB-hex coming and was surprised at Ginny's restraint. Excellent!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/2010 11:10 pm · Chapter: Making Amends

"In that order..." no less!
I just love it.
This chapter was so entertaining that I laughed out loud. Literally. The staircase was priceless. Was that canon? I can't recall? Wonderful read!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/2010 11:04 pm · Chapter: Making Mischief

Masterful confrontation. I couldn't have written something like this without having blood flying, I think. I like the little glimpse into Draco's character, too, a'la Flitwick. Nice touch!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/2010 10:57 pm · Chapter: A Distraction

If it wouldn't be so out of character, I'd swear that this chapter was Hermione setting Draco up - parading him around for all the students to see? Driving the other girls up the wall? Then kicking him? What IS going on?! ;-) So tasteful, as well! Must be a girl thing?

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/2010 10:51 pm · Chapter: A Debate

This chapter is just so well written in trying to bring Draco 'out of his shell' that I don't know where to begin. There are so many good jabs and inside jokes to it, that it's just amazing! A brilliant continuation, without being overdone, of Hg.Rev.

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 11/02/2010 10:29 pm · Chapter: A Conversation

I'm glad I remembered this next part! And I'm not just doing it for the review-a-thon either! I've truly enjoyed this story so far. It's just so well done without being the cliched Dramione that makes me want to rip an arm off and beat people with it!

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 20/02/2009 03:39 am · Chapter: Compromises

That was hysterical and you had everyone's part perfect, too.

Hermione just blew her whole 'cover' of being mad at Draco, though, didn't she?

HE!HE!HE!

ONWARD!

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