Only Hermione would wonder about the key.
I like this beginning of this version of your story a bit better than the other, as it gives us a glimpse of Draco,without really saying who he is and also of the Tallys and their involvment with Herminoe.
Okay, are you going to re-do the WHOLE bloody story or combine the two and edit and re-fit the bits you were displeased about?
I promise to read and enjoy both versions! OOh, I have . . never mind!
HE!HE!HE!
Ron Weasely is a selfish pig.
Hermione has every right to NOT trail after him, day after day, week after week, month after monthe, YEAR AFTER YEAR!
And she WASN'T asking him to quit . . . he wasn't listening....it was about him it was about HER!
MORON!!
HE!HE!HE!
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