Author's Response: Thanks! The dialogue actually came to me first, and then I built the story around it. I am glad the emotion came through well, as well as the humor. I don't like to be completely angsty. I have to have at least one laugh in a Fred and George story, or it wouldn't be true to them! I appreciate the review!
Well, I, for one LOVED it, and I'd have voted for you, luv!
Pocket portrait, huh? It'll be like the portrait of Dorian Grey done with laughs . . . HE!HE!HE!
Great little story and good view of grief process and how hard it really is to get through it.
Bravo!
Author's Response: I thought George would want to keep Fred close to him, kind of like he was when he was alive. I don't envision him carrying him around all the time, though. Just for that night, and that time. Thanks for the great review! I appreciate it!
Author's Response: You are definitely NOT and idiot. Thanks for the great words of encouragement though. I love my twins, and I wanted to show how George had to fight his way back. That, and a Fred/George conversation was SO much fun to write. They are great characters. I hate that JK killed him. I always try to figure out a plausible way I could bring him back, but I haven't found a believable one yet. If I do, I'm writing him back! Thanks for the review!
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