I finally got to review this story.
I must say, you capture Cho's voice very well. You said that this is not a pairing you normally do. Well, it's good to venture into new things. I must say, I wasn't ever a Cho fan, well not with Harry because he was sulky enough in year five without wanting encouragement, however, I don't mind her with Cedric.
The Harry/Cho moments that you described were very good though, not overly done and you show her confussion.
This story is very nicely written and the emotions come through very well. Nice details also.
Overall, really enjoyable. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Hi Victoria,
So nice to see you 'round. Thanks for your wonderful review and encouraging words; I'm really glad you liked this small piece.
Cho and Cedric were, as I said, completely new to me, at least, from a writers' perspective. Still, they were pretty straightforward to write, easier, than I thought. Actually, when I got this song from the person issuing the challenge, I knew the same instant it's got to be them and no one else. They just fit, basta.
Now, on to the future. If I were you, I'd look out for the third instalment of Seven Deadly Sins. I might be pleasantly surprised...
Zoltan
I, as a rule, don't read song fics, but this one interested me as I have met and talked to Faith Hill and have enjoyed listening to her singing this song. ( a lot of the fanfic songs I've never heard of - old bat that I am - HA!HA! )
INteresting angle for the story and great little details, showing the progression of Cho and Cedric's relationship. Wish they'd put that kiss before the maze bit in the movie!
Okay, on to your next story!
Author's Response:
Holly, my dear,
I, as a rule, do tend to write song fics, as I always get a lot of inspiration from what I see, hear, read; I'm an audio-visual type of person.
I never wrote any of the two characters before, so it was just interesting to wander away from my usual self, this time struggling to stay out of AU :) I'm glad Cho and Cedric were resembling themselves in this short story; I did some research to make events as exact as possible.
hp-lex.info is my friend :) And you are my greatest and bestest reviewer :) I've got a gift for you, sending it shortly to you by email. Just L'Oreal...because you're worth it :)
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