Excellent!
Not TOO angsty but just enough "confusion" in Harry's mind as to the whole relationship, and then to have it all unravel. Hermione REALLY overthinks things, doesn't she? AND overreacts!
BUT, I see there's more to this story waiting out there on the NEWLY POSTED list, so I'll stop this review and go read some more!
ONWARD!
HE!HE!HE!
Author's Response:
Hey Holly, my fabulous reviewer :)
Hermione is, REALLY, my most favourite character. But we can't write clichés, can we? AU good, cliché bad :) Gotta have the girl put on the edge. So she overthinks things. AND overreacts.
Hehehe, if I had a buck every time this story had been flamed before, I'd be driving a Lexus by now...I don't care. These are MY Harry and MY Hermione, I just lend them to y'all...
If you'd only knew what I'm planning with this story and the sequel...well I guess you'll know pretty soon, just couldn't help teasing you :)
Thanks for your patience with this AU guy and thanks for your wonderful reviews. Gotta answer all o'them...
Zoltan
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