Name: BKL8008 (Signed) ·
Date: 22/07/2009 04:14 am ·
Chapter: THE BRIDGE
I find this a good capture of Percy. I can really see it happening this way. All in all, well done. The only thing I don't agree on is one of the brothers blaming him for Fred's death, but here, it seems to work.
Author's Response: thanks for the review. this story was the way a saw percy after the war. And with the brothers thing I was more refering to george vrs. the other brothers the s at the end of that was a typo. The story actually didnt start as a hp fic at all it just flowed after the 1st few sentences. :) well anyways thank you for the review