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Name: Labby (Signed) · Date: 03/06/2008 05:48 am · Chapter: Chapter One
Wow, I really like this idea and I love this beginning. This is such a unique idea and I hope you continue with it. I liked the ending of this.. the careless young girl sending her grandmother away, without even realizing it. And I love the idea of her being able to talk to ghost. This whole set up is interesting so far. I'm looking forward to more!


Name: Lilybean84 (Signed) · Date: 28/01/2008 05:36 am · Chapter: Chapter One
WOW! It's like Harry Potter meets Ghost whisperer. I LOVE IT!

I love the way you started things. Just the thought of hanging out with her grandmothers ghost for five years is so priceless. Such a gift and in one moment it turned sour. I'm curious to see where you take this. I'll be looking out for the updates!

There are few spots where the wording is mucky and there are a few commas that snuck in when they're under age (bad joke I know) but other than that it's amazing!!


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