Name: Mind_Traveller (Signed) ·
Date: 29/11/2009 05:03 pm ·
Chapter: Chapter 1
Well, I wish I had more time for writing - these days, I have basically NO time at all... :(( However, part 3 has been unfinished since September and I intend to do it as soon as possible. In fact, I once have, but I lost the final page and can't clearly remember what actually happened... :((
Thanks for your review, anyway! :)
Name: JLHufflepuff (Signed) ·
Date: 01/09/2009 11:17 pm ·
Chapter: Chapter 1
I think you have shown Edward's thinking quite well. Youv'e based it on what we learn from him later in a way that is interesting and believable. I am wondering what you will do from here. We know some things about what went on but less about others. I'm interested to see how this will work out.