Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/2010 07:36 am · Chapter: Chapter 2

I like the bits of backstory and the clip about Marc A. & Cleo! It's humor like that that makes a story, even if it's not a comedy. You write well, and it's easy to read your stuff, too. As I mentioned, I've not read a Twilight fanfic before, but this one has me interested. I can't wait to see what you do with the idea of the Soul not being to locate its missing 1/2.

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/2010 07:27 am · Chapter: Chapter 1

I really like this idea. I once toyed with the idea of an immortal who finally remembers it all in his very last lifetime, but I never got around to making notes, even. This is a well conceived plot, even though I am not a "Twilight" person, I know who is who. It will be very interesting to see "your" take on the Vampires, from the viewpoint of an Immortal, Sentient Soul. Well done.

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