Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: Holly Ilex (Signed) · Date: 01/02/2010 04:56 am · Chapter: what the master calls the end of the world...

Well, I'm really not sure how I feel about this one . . .

I kept waiting to find out who was speaking . . and never did find out . .

Soooooo, it could have been a number of people, or someone you just made up . . . wouldn't be the first OC, huh?

But, a nice bit of angst and a fair share of forward looking determination . . so I hope who ever the git is this girl is mooning over wakes up in the near future! ( I'm a hopless romantic )

HE!HE!HE!

Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 16/01/2010 11:23 am · Chapter: what the master calls the end of the world...

This is a great capture of what "I" think describes a broken heart moving on. Those of us who've been here knows how "our hero" feels. And yet we don't know who it is. You think you do, but the clues indicate that it's not her. We don't need to know, though, and that's what makes it such a good read.

Author's Response: Ha, who do you think it is? XD I love that you don't know, because I purposely put in heaps of clues, I just didn't bother saying their names because... it retains that sort of feel. I'm pretty sure it must be who you think it is, really. :P Thank you for the review - I'm so glad I'm successful, because... I've never been through this. <3 You're a darl!

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