Author's Response: Okay, I'm glad to hear that. This was written in a bit of a panic in the middle of the night when the inspiration came to finish it and I'm always a bit wary about my pieces that are like that. They tend to be a bit...well, obscure. I don't think it's overly dependent on gender, possibly just style in general. I know of one male writer (admittedly only one!) who could probably do somethig like this. Thank you so much. The pairing stems from my slight obsession with Molly II as a character. Thank you.
Thought 2 - Either she had a total nervous breakdown when he left and is having a little "episode", OR she's just heard of his death and he's come to see her "one last time".
Thought 3 - I don't have a clue if I'm right or wrong and it really doesn't matter, does it? It can be taken anyway the reader wants, with any 'reason' for this little scene that their imagination can supply . . .if YOU have to tell us all the details, then WE aren't using our brains at all . . . our imaginations are our best asset in the fanfic world, which is where plot bunnies spring are hiding!
Enjoyed it a lot, look forward to more!
Author's Response: Actually, I've only posted 1 of the 3. I meant to take that out of the A/N but forgot. One of my Molly/Teddys should appear shortly and the OC story is a WIP and I'm still debating whether I want to publish it here - I'm aiming to post only my best stuff and that's far from it! As for thought 2, I'd go with the second. That's closer to what I was thinking but like you said, it's the reader's decision. I have another similar story where even I don't know what happens in it! Thank you so much, again :)
I love your style. You have a way with words that brings forth imagery and feeling. Once again, you have taken me on a journey and I felt happy and loved and excited.
A moment later, you bring me back to reality, and I'm so sad now :( But in a good way. I don't normally like stories that end up this way, but you simply write in a way that is beautiful, and then ending was just as sweet, although sad.
Well done!
Author's Response: Whoops - forgot to reply! Thank you so much, Elena. This was one of my "scrawled at midnight" pieces and I'm always a little wary of how they come off. This is the least weird of my three "midnight pieces" by far but I'm still hesitant about it. That sudden thump into reality is what I wanted, really and I'm glad that came off :) Thank you!
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