I don't think it's fluffy at all.
It's a good emtional capture, without being overdone, and I'm assuming it is set in DH when Remus left her and Harry tore him up for it?
Yay! Overdone fluff irritates me, as it is completely unrealistic. Yeah, well it can be set whenever you want. I wasn't particularly thinking of that time, just of sometime they had a fight. :) Thanks for the review! I will be checking out your page asap :D