I thought it might be Teddy, although I have hard time imagining him like this. Another well done piece. Good emotional capture. Like I've said, as a guy, I don't think I could do this.
So few words, yet packed withn a punch full of feelings!
Another piece that gives us a bit more of a taste of your writing brilliance. A part of me could see a bit of myself here. The moments we know better, but yeild to temptation, and forget everything else. The consequences, regardless, lay blame within ourselves, even after time has passed and the hurt is long forgiotten. Every now and then, we feel that pinch, and wonder why we were so blindly stupid?
Thank you for sharing this with us :) I enjoyed it.
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