So serenely sweet. Oh my Goodness! I think I will be repeating this phrase quite often if you keep up this pace pouring out one marvellous story after another.
Neville touched me more in the books than anyone else. There was no one else having gone through such a thorough and deep metamorphose like him. What has become of the almost-Squib, the forgetful, clumsy boy that had entered Hogwarts at the age of eleven?
This was such a touching piece of parents gone but not forgotten. For even when they're gone, they still remain your parents watching over you from above. And Hannah... I didn't like the actress portraying her in GoF, but here you made a beautiful person of her, loving, caring, understanding.
You teared me up with the last sentence. So simple, yet so beautiful. Precisely enough told, without being pathetic or cliche-ridden.
Thank you, yet again, for this amazing reading.
If you have some spare time, I'd love to hear your opinion on my take on Neville, the one-shot titled What We Believe In.
Last, but not least: Happy New Year!
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