What I love the most is that it's very real and well balanced. Their friendship isn't :o dramatic!, and the fact that they're in different houses is something they don't really mind too much, even if their parents did, and they don't get all worried right off the bat and that's wonderful. They're two eleven-year-olds who don't have a lot of cares, and friendship is something fun and simple. You convey all of it so beautifully, and I have no idea if any of this review makes sense but just know that I LOVE this!
Blaire
Nice that the kids can see past the hatreds and the feuds when the parents didn't.
I second Elena's request for more... A sequel at least?
Loved it. 10/10
*blinks* I'm looking for the 'Next' button...Will it magically appear??? There HAS to be more!! You can't just leave it here!!! I wanna know if their friendship goes just as strong as it started...I want to know if Albus will grow up and get a pair of....
Kick me next time if I don't read your stories. I'm serious!! Poke my eye ball out, hex me into the next universe...doi something to wake my lazy arse up and READ your stories!!!!
I loved this, I thought everything about it was fantastic. You described everything so well, that I felt Rose's embarrasment and frustrations when Albus ignored her and Hagrid pointed out the empty seat. I felt her annoyance with being stuck with a boy that seemed nasty.
I felt Rose's excitement as the castle came into view and she finally got to see what all the fuss is about...But most of all, I felt Rose's connection to Scorpius. Even before she knew who he was, she felt comfortable with the boy she thought annoying, she felt so comfortable, in fact, that she forgot that she was holding his hand...It was just too sweet and adorable and I wanted to squish both of them into a big hug for being so cute!!
What a brilliant story, though, I still want more!!!
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