very good story. I m new to the site so i am ging o tke some time and rad all I can.
On a personal note:
really enjoyed the character named Phyllis. My mothers name, and todays mothers day.
Fond memories, I miss her so much sometimes
Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks!
~madelgranger
i love the mystery! cant wait to read more of the chapters!
Author's Response:
thank you very much! more chapters should be up soon :D
~madelgranger
love the whole thing!!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you so much! I'm glad :D
The plot thickens! I love the Rose-outbursts. I have this sense that someone is about to ask James, "Does the word 'eunuch' mean anything to you?" LOL! Onward, as Holly would say!
Author's Response:
thanks! haha, I wish I had thought of that. . . perhaps it will make its way in (I'll give credit, of course, if it does) I'm glad you like the
Rose-outbursts; entertainment is the point after all. :D Thanks for reviewing!
~madelgranger
A bit confusing to start off, but it lines out. I like the idea of Ravenclaw. You seldom see this House mentioned, especially with the NextGen. I choked on my coffee when the word "castrate" was mentioned! Poor boy will have a complex now...
Author's Response:
thanks! I'm glad the confusion goes away. I'm happy you liked that bit; it amused me when I thought of it. thank you so much for reviewing!
~madelgranger
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