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This was lovely Leslie m'dear! I don't really have anything bad to say about this. It's wonderful! I will say that the description gets a bit muddled. But over all I absolutely love this.

I'm sooooo sorry it took me so long to get to this review. And it sucks.

LOVE YOU

xoxo

Shiloh

Another great chapter Leslie!

I really liked your idea here of going back and developing on Allie's character a bit more prior to her kidnapping. I think it really set up the foundations and allows the reader to be more sympathetic to her. Not that they don't, but its definately heightened. I also really liked your description because it was a nice mix and not heavy.

In all, another lovely update! Well done!

10/10

xxx

Leslie!

This really was yet another wonderful chapter!

I thought that you really developed her family well here and really set down the foundaitions for a great story. Your use of description was also wonderful and kept the pace without taking anything away. It truely was flawless.

This was another wonderful chapter and I really must commend you on trying your hand at original fiction, you are definately succeeding!

10/10

xxx

Leslie!

You mentioned this in the cbox over on tgs so I thought I would drop by and read it and consequently review.

I really liked the idea of this story, I think you have set up the scene perfectly and really kicked the plot off with a bang. You have captured the darker side of this event and I really liked it!

I really want to know what happens next so update soon, this was excellent! :)

xxx