OMG!!!! I AM HOOKED ON THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!More, I want more, soon, please!
The descritions of the people and the party were engrossing and completely put me in the middle of the action . . .I could almost hear the music . . . and the dialogue was smart and sharp and true to life,, so you really fell all of the emotions flying back and forth between Molly and "the guy' and Molly, Dom & Roxy the next morning . . .
MORE!!!!!!!!!
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Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked this :) I just recently went through and heavily edited the first three chapters I had written so I'm glad it turned out well. Thanks for the review.
-Shiloh
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