Well written as always, good character capture, and everything one has come to expect from you! I always wondered what was going on "in their heads" with the mistletoe and Nargles topic! The addition of thoughts of a bed in the R/R was masterful, and typical of any teenage boy. A bit on the mooshy side for my liking, though! hehe
Author's Response:
Just a silly and completely unnecessary short drabble. I guess I mirrored my own proper first kiss here, shamelessly stealing that snmal scene from OotP.
I wrote this very quickly before the idea could escape my head and didn't really give much thought into details, but I always liked this scene in the movie. I was actually jealous of Dan, especially seeing what a beauty Katie Leung has become!
I couldn't possibly write anything "not mooshy", having gotten the prompt "honey", could I? :D
Thank you for your heart-warming review.
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