really good story.
It gave me a few ideas myself.
got to love Fan Fiction/JK
really enjoyed the story. I am hoping you continue with it. My mind is just racing with ideas of what the spell is and where each of the other boys are at. I got the feeling that Sirius has already accomplished changing into Padfoot.
I also would like to follow your ideas on what the spell is and how they discovered it. I am sure its not generally known or everyone would be trying to transform.
GH
Fluffy, but very good! I enjoyed every word of it. I never gave much thought to the Marauders practicing their shape-shifting. You have such a clever idea here, and capture their personalities to a "T"! Excellent job. Perfect Lily, too!
Author's Response: Thanks! This was a challenge for a competition, and it was a little difficult since I don't really do much Marauder era stuff. I'm glad you think I got the characters done correctly. It was a stretch! I appreciate the review so much!~GW
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