As always, excellent. I always thought there should have been more to this scene (Fred's death) and much less in other places of the book. The combination of characters is wonderful as well. I am continually amazed at the quality of your short chapters here. This will probably be my last review for a while, though. Busy season at  work is starting (photos lab) and I won't have much time for fanfiction sites! :(

In such a short piece, you have captured so much and built the character of Ernie so well. We know so little about him, as we do many of the supporting characteres in canon. I like how, with only 1 or 2 lines, you invoke such disgust for Z. Smith. I have to say, I didn't want this chapter to end, either. It was as if we are right there alongside Ernie, feeling his hopelessness. Hufflepuff by nature, his instinct is to try hard and be loyal to his friends - which he can't do when he's all alone. It was almost enough to make one cry, upon rereading it. This is probably the best chapter so far, to date, in this series.

Nice. You don't see much about the Hufflepuffs, or Susan, or Ernie - none of them. I like the characterization of Susan here, and her observations of Ernie as well. Fitting. Your tales are just so good! And it seems you can get the site to work for you to post, too! (Which I can't).

Wow! When one stops to think about it, even with what little we know about Mrs. Longbottom, one can see her doing something outrageous - but this is a real stunner. Pardon the pun. I was immediately pulled in to what would be in her old letter, and suddenly, there it was. The smack in the face, let's say. One doesn't see that much of Mrs. Longbottom in fanfic, but this is a powerful ending for what would seemingly have been a rough life. 10/10

Another excellent installment. The brief but curt ending was just right. Well done for an OC , too.

Sweet Luna. She'd grown to be my most favourite character and I'm a sucker for a nicely written Luna Lovegood fic. I do love to write her as well, for example in "Shadowlands".

This is a loony chapter indeed. Her mind may not fuction the same way other minds would work, yet one can not wish for a more trustful friend than the rather improbable phenomenon called Luna.

I loved each and every word of it. 

On a side note, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter(s). I can't imagine what could have possibly prompted your ban from HPFF, but you're not alone. I got kicked off myself a few months ago. I'd gladly share my thoughts with you in private.

Why does everybody hate Cho? I don't, my story "There You'll Be" is a proof. Everyone has his/her flaws. In the end, she fought side-to-side with Harry and the rest, even broke her long-term friendship with Marietta because of her betrayal.

One of the most remarkable, most accurate peeks into Cho Chang's mind. 

Blessedly succinct, this small first chapter is. That has been a gloomy year in Hogwarts: terror, fear lurking around the corner and two insane Death Eaters as Professors. The eerie atmosphere is fancily depicted in between your lines. As BKL said, and I would like to expand his opinion: "In this story the unwritten, that thing that can be read between the lines, is much more powerful, much more present than the words written".

The best story I have read on any archive in the past year. Full stop.

Ah, Luna, I love her! You've done a perfect capture of her character here. Probably the best "Luna" I've ever read!

Another excellent piece! I can see it happening exactly like this without any stretch of the imagination. I always did wonder whatever became of the galleons.  I was never ever a fan of Cho, either! hehe. Sorry! To see her in this emotional state just makes my day. Isn't that awful?! Again, well done. I can't wait to see more of these.

This is remarkable. I do so want to read more of these. In the case of Carter, I see even more lines between the lines: 'A boy who will never play Muggle football again. A boy who will walk with a cane for the rest of his life. There are some things that I simply cannot fix.' I have no other words for it. Remarkable. Probably one of the strongest pieces I have ever read.