A good start to a story, it leaves me looking for more so I hope you add to it.
River
Author's Response:
thanks
as soon as winters over, I hope to get back to writing
I like the premise so far, although it seems a bit rushed and is a bit confusing at the beginning. It took a bit to figure out the table bit. Perhaps a bit more explanation, but other than that, really enjoyed the backstory as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
I will go back through and put in a little bit of filler to make the premise clearer
also happy to see someone is visiting the site besides myself.
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