Very good! Love the bit about cursing, and the cooking. So very Hermione.
Truly a great capture of Ron.
The ending cracked me up! The worst team ever tried to sign Harry! This chapter seemed a bit out of touch with the series, but it was still a good one. Quidditch stuff can hardly hold my interst for long, but this did.
Author's Response:
I felt like a reader of Ginnys piece would want the dirt, and she gave them nothing of the sort except a damn good quidditch tale. Thanks!
In all honesty, not too sure about this one. It doesn't seem to be in character for Luna, to me. The part about 'hope', however, was very well done. I liked that.
Author's Response:
Damn, I was trying to write Luna out of character to show how far she fell. That was the point, if someone as care free as Luna was afraid, then damn. Oh well, worth a shot.
Another really good chapter. Took me a while to figure out who it was, though.I love the idea of parent involvement, too.
I think Dumbledore was a Gryffindor, however, according to at least Pottermore.
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Damn, I guessed on Dumbledore, seemed to make sense. Thanks for the review!
This one is just great. I can see George doing just these things. Great thing about Freddy (I don't think he'd have the Jr., though,) is JK has never nailed down his DOB so he can fit into fanfic just about anywhere. Somehow, I think that he would probaby be the eldest of the batch.
I like the idea of the story, and especially the titles. My only complaint is that your punctuation makes it a bit hard to read. I am also a bit confused on who's wife was taken, certainly not Molly, unless I missed an AU tag. Other than that, a good capture of Arthur.
You raise an interesting point as well - I don't recall anyone ever saying "I love you" to Harry in the books.
Author's Response:
Ah, I got nailed by the TOS of this site; each chapter must be 800 words, so that first blurb is supposed to be from the Editor of the Daily Prophet, explaining what you are about to read. I was forced to make the prologue and chapter 1 into one, I need to edit that bit so it's more clear. Thanks!
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