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Name: granpa harry (Signed) · Date: 12/08/2014 02:59 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

I liked it, 

it was a little slow moving so it took me a few tries to get through it all

really enjoyed the Fred/Luna ship



Author's Response:

Many thanks for your review. It is not really a Fred Luna Ship just banter and nudity, they aren't even together for the latter. Glad you took the time to leave your comments, thanks once again.
Tgfoy



Name: BKL8008 (Signed) · Date: 07/08/2014 04:59 pm · Chapter: Chapter 1

Great read! Loved it. Fills in a good part of what's missing from the canon.



Author's Response:

Many thanks glad you enjoyed it.



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