This story is absolutely beautiful. I love the little glimpses into their relationships. (James and Lily's but also, the Maurauders' and Lily's) And that ending.... I melted. I've never been a big James/Lily shipper, but I may have to read more after this. Thanks for such an amazing story!
You took many little moments that most authors would stretch into a full length story and made the most perfect one-shot ever. The idea to do little snapshots of their year was genius! And, quite honestly, stories that get to the point are my favorite.
Your characterizations were spot on and the writing was easy to read and follow along with. Lily’s inner thoughts were fun to read and it was enjoyable to see her character grow so much in one chapter! I don’t think I can say enough times that I loved it! After not reading fanfic for many years, this was a wonderful dose.
As for who wrote this...I’m not even going to try to guess as I’m not even remotely aware of the number of people who signed up (I know, I’m horrible haha). But, to whoever you are, thank you! If you’re a person, like me, who hasn’t written in awhile, you did a phenomenal job and I think you should put writing back on your to do list because you’re mighty good at it. 🤗
Thank you again!
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