Gluttony: Fanfiction :: Indulge Yourself!

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 17/05/2008 03:38 am · Chapter: Newberry Animal Hospital

I'm sure this is just a typo, but Dogs were not natural predators of Hungarian Horntails, that should be prey, right?

I like how you have this tension between the two, I do hope that it'll ease up soon, though and that Emilia will start to feel more comfortable with Charlie. Charlie never really seemed the quiet type to me either. I'm anxious to see where you take these two.

Author's Response: Yeah, I swear I fixed that already, but I guess not. Someone just pointed it out to me on HPFF too.. I guess I'll go back to fix it - thanks for pointing it out. The relationship between the two is quite interesting, as I'm sure you've figured out by now. Thank you so much for all of your reviews.. I appreciate them and I will eventually catch up on responding to all of them!

Name: ginwannabe (Signed) · Date: 16/05/2008 04:33 am · Chapter: Killings

I read this chapter over on HPFF ages ago...but I never got back to the story. I'm determined to catch up on it now, but it's late and I'm tired. As for this chapter, I enjoyed the way you have set up the beginning of this. The character introductions while not terribly in depth give us a glimpse into these people that we'll be reading about and make me want to find out more about them. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story, and I promise, I won't abandon it this time.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for coming back to this! I'm glad you like the beginning so far. The characters personalities will come out a lot more in future chapters. This is more like an introduction to the scenery and all and like you said, just a glimpse into the characters. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review! :)

Name: Jen (Signed) · Date: 13/05/2008 09:46 am · Chapter: Healing

Hi Labby,
Just wanted to let you know that I am seriously loving this story... I always check it first to see if there are new chapters whenever I log on. If you want someone to run it by before you put it on here, I'd be reeeeally happy to volunteer.

Jen

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm so glad you like it! :) I actually just got a new beta, so I have someone looking over it already, but I appreciate the offer! I'm home from school now, so there should be quicker updates! I really appreciate your review!

Name: Jen (Signed) · Date: 10/03/2008 08:34 am · Chapter: Newberry Animal Hospital

Going really well so far Labby... I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I've just put in the next chapter (up to 8), so they all should be coming out soon. I appreciate the review! :)

Name: fhestia (Signed) · Date: 07/03/2008 01:51 am · Chapter: Newberry Animal Hospital

You write very well! I've never read a story with Charlie Weasley as a character and I'm enjoying your chararcterization of him. Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you.. I'm so glad you like it so far. I have the first 8 chapters out so far, so more should be coming soon. I love writing about Charlie Weasley. :) Thanks for your review!

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